911 Revisited



On Sept. 11, 2001, the United States was changed forever. Write about how you felt then and how you feel now. Have you become more or less interested in what is going on in the world? Do you respect your freedom a little more?

Check:

1. _____ 5 to 8 sentences including a topic and conclusing sentence.
2. _____ Five elements of good writing, focus on IDEAS
3. _____ vivid language to express your feelings
4. _____ Good concluding sentence
5. _____ Clearly reworked draft
6. _____ All three papers stapled with final copy on top.
7. _____ The signature of an adult who helped you proofread your rough draft.

submitted by Melanie L.



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